Week 4 Story
Image information: Sampati talking to the monkeys and bears, Image credit: IndiaNetzone
As a bird, I could travel anywhere. The world was my oyster. From around the world, it has been said that birds have plunged and dived into the ocean, reaching beyond limits and breaking bounds! Although my nest maybe small compared to the rest of the world, but my home is the whole universe.
Up in the Himalaya, I used to live with my brother Jatayu as well as other large birds. Our nests made of stone, were barely holding together because of the number of birds that would huddle together at night. I always slept by my brothers side. Sometimes, I could even hear his heart beat, as I’m sure he could’ve heard mine beating along with his.
One day, Jatayu and I decided to race through Indra’s world. Side-by-side we flew. For one moment there, everything felt right, like nothing bad could happen. We soared through the sky with the fierce sun looking straight at us. All of a sudden, I heard Jatayu calling out to me. I looked back, and there he was falling through the sky. My brother had fainted and tumbled through the air!
I couldn’t believe it with my own eyes. I quickly gathered speed and outstretched my wings to shield him from the cruel sun. Yet, before I could realize what was happening, I could smell my wings burning from the flames of the wild sun. Clutching onto my brother, we plummeted onto the summit of Mount Vindhya.
All I could smell was the burning flesh of my wings. I remembered just lying there unconscious, with searing pain surrounding my entire body. When I recovered, I woke learning that my eyesight was dimmed and I had no wings. I don’t think I was ever so devastated. I thought that I was going to die. However, life was good to me. I knew it wasn’t my time to go, so I held myself up and dragged my half-burned body down the slope and back home.
As I sat there telling my story to the monkeys and bears, I did not want them to feel pity for me. I, for one, was proud that I was able to save my brother from falling to his death. Although I lost my wings in the process, at least it was’t my brother that I had lost.
Living patiently without my wings, I never thought the day where I’d hear of my brother’s passing. With that being said, I do hope that noble Rama is able to find his queen. However, I do ask that you carry me to the shores of Varuna’s world, where I may celebrate the ceremony of lustrous waters in honor of my deceased brother.
Authors note: In the original story “Sampati and Jatayu,” I felt like Sampati was not able to recognize his own strength and beauty after receiving all those burns from saving his brother. He believed that as a bird, you were born to fly. Furthermore, after losing his wings, it seems as though he had lost a part of himself. In the story that I chose to wrote, I wanted to change Sampati’s view of himself. I wanted for Sampati to realize his own strength and courage when he decided to rescue his brother.
This story brought emotion out of me. Sampati's wings were a huge part of his life and unfortunately were taken away from him. He could have sulked and felt pity for himself but instead, responded in the best way. He found a different, non literal way to fly by keeping a positive attitude. I am sure this story will inspire readers to stay positive in difficult situations. It did for me.
ReplyDeleteSara, your story was filled with finding your inner self. It also was filled with lots of emotions. As Sampati and Jatayu are falling through the air there is a sacrifice that takes place so one must suffer something while the other is unaffected. In this case, it is Sampati. I like you established in the beginning that he did not want others feeling pity for him therefore it shows that he has some sense of pride. At the same time, he has come to accept the life that he is now living and cherishes it for what he has. This character development is something really cool to see and the fact that he is still able to reflect on his brother even in those times is something special. I wonder what would happen if Jatayu came back to visit him? I think you should add this and it would further develop Sampati’s character.
ReplyDeleteHey Sara,
ReplyDeleteYour descriptive words when Jatayu and Sampati were flying through the air was very detailed. It was easy to visualize! I liked how you changed Sampati's attitude from the original story. You could see his strength after his wings were burnt off and vision was not that good. When I read this story I wondered where Jatayu was. Was he nearby? Could he have helped his brother? I thinking adding this part will help close a gap in the story.
Your classmate,
Joanna
Hey there, Sara! I really enjoyed your story, and it was so well written in terms of illustration! I think it is so unique to have written from Sampati's point of view... not only because we see limited amounts of him in the Ramayana, but because there is so much imagery involved with being a bird. Very cool story to read!
ReplyDeleteHi Sara,
ReplyDeleteI really loved your take on this story. I like the story being told from the view point of Sampati. I felt his excitement and especially his raw pain in the moments dealing with his brother getting hurt and passing and his pain of losing his wing. I like that you made him such a strong character and made him carry on even though he was badly hurt and his wings were gone. Very great story!